Monday, August 27, 2007

Photo Critic corner ~ New feature



1. What's with the tilt? Fancy pj style dho hehe

2. Conflict of emotions with...main subjects in front (smiling and relaxed) with standing row (angry and tense)? or... how many subjects are there, btw? Red lady in the front or guy making hand gestures?
3. Overall very harsh lighting... aggravated by over exposure and blown out highlights
4. Too many faces in a jumble. All in awkward positions... Kd seems to be smooching the little guy in front
5. Distracting crown again... see guy in blue shirt
6. Could have cropped out the bald guy on the bottom left. Too distracting and seems bite into the red ladys armpit
7. Another bald guy in blue shirt walking away from center of interest. Crop.
8. Three distinct planes of action...(fore, middle and backgrounds) all creating tension. Could have limited the dof to correct this prob!
9. Guy on extreme right seems to have a 360 degree turned head
10. Guy from front row has cut off hands

11. Hey. Everything can't be bad dho. Look at Lubus (lady from third row) cool angelic expression.
Photo source: http://www.haveeru.com.mv/

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

hehehe. dhen keekey bunaanee. esorumenge haalun esorumen ulhenee. hahahaha

Aug 28, 2007, 7:37:00 AM
Anonymous said...

Kaaku nagaafa in photo eh baa???? varah over exposed shot eh dho!!!

Aug 28, 2007, 10:40:00 PM
Mauroof said...

zahid kaleyah haadha vaguthu oveyay dho!! hehe...
i think i know who u critisised here... but it's constructive (lol)
hey your sunset (hut) shot i faved is awesome dude
addu ah nugos den hama neiy vaakah.

Aug 30, 2007, 12:10:00 PM
Island hopper's diary said...

Mauroof:
honestly, i ddnt know who took the photo. i dont care!

just that i spotted a lot of mistakes that could have been dealt with before displaying on a national website. lol

i will continue with this series, regardless

just pray that your photo dosent go up on haveeru front page. :p

Aug 30, 2007, 1:05:00 PM

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